i love 'other people's maps'
not sure this is your best stuff though.
very very true, for the most part.
poor soulless london.

soft heads
wear the jeans
and watch the screens

very nice poem
the examples you gave were really fitting
i don't live in a large city myself, but i've been to them
and i want to scream at all the people too
and tell them to wake up and dance or something. :)