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| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 8, | abuseomg nash argh! why does he always have to leave poor little kim alone! omg the light of my laptop is burning my eyes! i think i may have to stop reading for tonight. ah but no i cant, this story is just too good! i love ur telling of club scenes, i could seriously picture the whole thing playing out in my head as i was reading it. ok next chapter. (dear god i wish i knew how to adjust the damn brightness on laptops!) |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 7, | abusesigh now i find out reviews only have to be two words. u should have mentioned this long ago!! i like the pace of this story, its great. and wow nash bro has some hard out slang going on. totally gangstow. nice |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 6, | abusesadness rules! well fictional sadness anyway. wowza he sure is torn up. sometimes i find it hard to believe someone can be so emo? upset over something like that, but then ive never been in love like your character kim is, so i dont think i can say much about it. nice chappie |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 5, | abuseok i really REALLY liked this chapter! im not sure why, but i loved the whole feel of it, and the scenes that happened. and i was so happy to have kim described, now i starting to get that mental image of charaters you get in ur head, when reading books. i also liked how ashleighs? (sorry cant spell) point of view was included, its all very insightful. |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 4, | abuseahefwubba. anyway. omg wat do i say. um well i enjoyed this chapter aswell. it had a nice dose of cuteness and also seriousness. um...ur writing flows really nicely, it doesnt make my brain hurt, like some ppls writing does as u dont know wat the flamming heck they're on about. |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 3, | abuseman now i know why ppl dont review! i just wanna hurry on to the next chapter! but that would be selfish so i guess il suck it up. i love this story! i dont know wat else to say besides how much i love it...man i suck at reviews. i just cant find any negative points about it. herm. |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 2, | abusewoho so there is some angst! im glad to see the opinions on self mutilation and mockery, u make good points come across in ur story! bravo! i like nash, and kim, i hope it describes what they look like soon. :) |
| mad-one123 2008-10-09 ch 1, | abusethe first chapter of this story has totally caught my attention. i never knew band stuff could be so emotional! wah. and i like how the hardest parts of their lives werent all those ahard core angsty stuff.(but i DO love angst). im excited to read the rest! must dash off to chapter 2! |
| JorgieWaters 2008-10-07 ch 24, | abuseI've been so lazy here lately. I've been reading and not reviewing. Hope you can forgive me. Anyway, all I really have to say this time is: Finally! cx |
| xomizkimox 2008-10-04 ch 18, | abusethis was a touching chapter~^^ thank yoU!! |
| CaFFy 2008-10-01 ch 24, | abuseTHE CHAP WAS TOO LONG DAMN YOU. I HAVE SCHOOL IN THE MORN. (2:43 am) xDD Ok so... I'm a procrastinator. So shoot me xD Fluffy sex is always good and that's better than what I can do :P |
| Balliett 2008-09-29 ch 24, | abuseI am driven into speechless quiet by the beauty of this story. The way your words weave, the way your characters just click, the way all the pieces just seem to fit. It's truly heartfelt and brimming with such real emotion. I cannot name the number of time this story made my heart break with its renditions of life's flaws. I cannot name the number of times this story made me smile, made me laugh, made me cry. I am simply stunned by how gorgeous this story is. I feel the pain, the hurt, the bonds, the love, all the emotion you put in this story. I mean I really feel it. Your story is like a moment of silence suddenly being filled with buckets of colors and the sweetest sounds of music. There are few stories, few books out there that inspire me creatively. Your story never stops inspiring me. As I read your words and I feel the immensity of them, I feel a lingering itch to just write something. It is the flow of your words, the very down-to-earth realness, the flaws that make me swoon so wistfully. You have created something wonderful. And I'm very delighted to have found it. I just wish I had found it sooner. I ADORE KIM AND NASH AND EVERYBODY (except Deigo) AND I LOVE YOU EPICALLY, DEAREST! xD This story is teh bomb diggety. I love, love, love it. I don't know how to express it well enough that all of my immense admiration for it would be known. Your story: it's just so human, so fragile yet strong, so lovely. I probably sound like a broken record, but I can't help it. I am in awe. You are amazing, really. And this may just be the longest review I've ever written for this site. =D This story is absolutely, epically, fantastically beautiful. You deserve many loves. -tackleglomphugglechu- |
| NekoKamiFL 2008-09-29 ch 24, | abuseWhether it matters or not, I just read up to the latest chapter of this story in about six hours. Probably less. Roughly what this translates into is that I think you have written an amazing piece of work. I can't find anything in it that seems bad enough to complain about - or to mention, even. You have a wonderful style that serves your characters and your story well. I was shocked and really pleased when I read one of your earlier author's notes and saw your age. Talented young writers are rare, and I consider myself lucky to have come across one like you. Thank you for sharing this story, and I hope to see more of it soon. |
| aripie 2008-09-29 ch 24, | abusewow that was ridiculously hot and you should be darn proud!! hahaha god i love these two! |
| Thread of Life 2008-09-28 ch 24, | abuseWow so I read this like 7 minutes after you first updated because I was looking at my email when I got the notice, but then I forgot to review because I had to go leave somewhere... -fails- Anyways, I was wondering if Kim would be... dirty? sick? bwaha I am not very verbal today. DISEASED? It would have sucked. It's like "you ALMOST had a chance to be happy!" But I am glad he didn't. It would have been... ironic? Also, I realized that I love the way Nash talks. And the fact that Kim doesn't really talk like that. I love it. AND OMGZ THEY BANGED!1!1!1!one!1!eleven!1!1 (I'm sure fp will edit that out heavily and therefor make no sense to you.) Aw you did a good job!! I really can't wait to read what's next. |