Reviews for Two Glasses One Unused

simpleplan13
2008-03-08
ch 1,

abuseI like how the first stanza kind of gives an image of the physical environment.. though the last two lines didn't read right... does the last line mean you were so desperate for speakers you wouldve paid more? or just that it was half off retail? I dunno it seemed odd

I like how it then switches to emotion and the firefly imagery is insanely awesome

I love the title line.. it's a great description of the feeling... and the last stanza was really awesome... liquid being a temporary bandage is true and nicely described.. the last two lines are so seemingly silly, but with such sadness in them

PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)

Aquafied
2008-03-06
ch 1,

abusei am too young to know how the heart breaks
but just young enough
to break them.

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