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scribnix
2008-08-24
ch 1,
See you've been using that old friend Thesaurus again! It seems the more life changes, the more it stays the same. Ah well. Looks at least that this time you were lucky in love. Nice to imagine. I wonder how your search for God is coming along? Laugh or die, Mr. Aelux...laugh or die.
Duzzie
2008-03-05
ch 1,
You're right, it is abstract, but I do really like it. To be honest, I understood the beginning, but started losing it near the middle, and was brought back into it near the end. Your own meaning of the poem? Because everyone interprets things differently. But I really liked the structure and your wordings, you do have a way with those...Ah, well, will talk soonish!
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