Reviews for Once Bitten, Twice Forgotten

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peppermintstorm 2008-07-26 ch 8, anon.	abusehey louisa, You're doing such a fab job that the waits in between the updates seem like a million years. I ahve absolutely no patience, and your story keeps me on my toes so please update soon. I love your writing. It has such a natural flow that it completely absorbs me into it. Keep up the good work.
simplicity is complex 2008-07-26 ch 8,	abuseYAY DOM :D I will give you a lifetime's supply of DOUBLE chocolate chip cookies from subway for a lifetime with him! AH. DOM :D But then... waves Adidas jacket Come're Dom! Jacket's waiting~ It's right. Here. For. You. You. Cannot. Resist! And you are way right. Swooning I will be :D Yep, I don't do bio. NO. Bio is not worth hating me over. So not worth it. I'm way too lovable for that. Haha. And yep, I'm intending to go into an Arts stream with H2 Math as my contrasting subject. But then again I feel like dropping Math and that MIGHT happen if I can qualify for Knowledge and Inquiry. The subjects I take now are Language Arts (English & a little bit of Literature, my school is weird.), Chinese (the bane of my existence.), Integrated Math ('A' and 'E' math), Integrated Humanities (Somewhat like General Paper, or so we are told), Chemistry, Physics (I really hate Newton) and Geography (which is a waste of my time). My school's really weird with the combinations. They claim it's better this way. Better, my foot. Haha, terrorizing sisters who might be the ones paying for my university education might not be too good an idea. Heh. I still do want to go to US, and, am not really willing to go for a scholarship interviews. I do not do good with interviews. Well, actually I haven't had an interview before but I do not foresee myself doing well in one. Toggle typing. Heh. Fun to annoy people with. Recently, I've taken to annoying my friends with... Like, y'know. Like, yeah. Like, you mean you like, don't know? Like, man! That is like, what everyone, like, knows! Like, duh. Like, I mean, like, don't you like, get me? Like, yeah. Like, never mind. Bimbo arm thing Heh it annoys the heck out of them and I get kicks out of seeing their eyebrows twitch in annoyance :D Am I evil or am I evil? Anyway, yes Dom must be kept safe from the evils of a love triangle. No, you cannot include him in minor ones, he must be protected from all sorts of evil love triangles. I will stand between him and all love triangles, for I am the best weapon. As, once he sees me he will fall in love with me and there will be no need for love triangles :D I have indeed robbed him of his sanity. His heart, soul, mind are all MINE :D Muahaha. And even in the world where all the other OBTF characters DO exist, SARAH WILL STILL MARRY DOM! Just that her chances get better when all the other OBTF characters do not exist. Interesting? Fantastic, more like it :D ANYWAY (again. Heh I love saying anyway whilst dragging out the "any"), AH squeals and does the annoying Mary Murphy scream (sorry I've been watching sytycd, MARK FTW!)WARD AND LEIGH :D HAHAHAHA "Your girlfriend? You never mentioned her!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. And Matt! AW SO CUTE he's so obviously upset that she rather go out with Ward than him :D MUAHAHA Ward is smart,I'd give him that. And Matt and Dom dynamics are wonderful. VUNDERFOL. They're both afraid of.. THEIR RELATIVES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA my goodness. They both make it so. Cute :D Anyway I can't say more. (Well actually I can, but that's not the point this review is long enough already) I have to go for dinner. UPDATE SOON OR FEEL MY WRATH. Heh, no just kidding. Take your time. Just make sure that there's DOM :D Feel the DOM love.
blackbubbleblue 2008-07-25 ch 8,	abuseYAY. I love this chapter. And I like Ward better than Mat I don't know why but I think it's because he notices how she feels more. Where as mat seems more self absorbed but that's just the impression I got. Anyway when are we going to see more Dom and Callie they make such a funny couple?
shesabeautyx 2008-07-25 ch 8,	abuseI FINALLY got around to reading this chapter, even though you updated days ago. Life's been crazy, and I feel like free time is rare and treasurable. Well I'll definietly say that it was worth the wait, and I wasn't the least bit dissapointed. The only thing is that I wish there was more dialouge.. or maybe that it flowed better. I don't really know how to explain it... but it's like Leigh lauches into these thoughts in the midst of a conversation making me forget what the conversation was about in the first place, you know what I mean? But if that's your writing style, I can't exactly reprimand you for that. I adore Ward and Leigh. You'll probably hear me say that like every single review because I seriously do adore them. If I had to vote for my favorite couple on fiction press, I'm pretty sure that they would be in my top 20. (Which is saying a lot, since there's thousands of stories). I loved how Ward got along with Leigh's friends so easily. He's going to fit in so nicely... and eh I don't know how I feel about Matt right now. On one hand, I want to knock Leigh upside the head and ask her what in the world she's thinking going after Matt when Ward is freaking right it front of her, but childhood crushes are so hard to get over! I'm sure all of us have experienced that one time or another. But yeah, I'm pretty sure that if you put up a picture of Ward, then people would definietly start asking you about the other characters. So I won't rebuke you for not doing it. Anyways, great chapter as always. I'll be looking forward to the next one :)
Tecna 2008-07-25 ch 8,	abuseMan! It really sucks, the fact that you can't go straight to the climax, you seriously have to update soon. Ward is finally starting to feel something for Leigh, I really want to read his point of view, but seeing as you never do that and never did that in TCC, I hold out no hopes. I'm glad to know that it's going to be less of a cheerleader being a villian and more, as it seems to be leaning; towards Matt. I can't wait to find out what on earth will happen, update asap, I mean it! Don't make me wait! Btw, I love Ward! Can I please have him for my own? Pretty please?! Tecna ;)
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-24 ch 8,	abuseIndeed the updating speed is like PMS 'wails' update son! I wanna know what happens! whinge over Loved it!
deny.me.not 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseWard is definitely my favorite character so far, because he's such a cool character...and he's hot (at least in my brain he is). His observations about Matt and Leigh sound pretty true if I think about it. I sense something cookin' between Ward and Leigh! =] That was a good chapter, made me smile and happy. =] I look forward to your next update. -dmn.
covered 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseNO! YOU CANT JUST STOP THE STORY RIGHT THERE! ughh great job...AGAIN :DD this is my favorite story of all time because all of the characters are so real and i just adore the love triangle-ing :)
righthere431 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuselol cute
soaring glass 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseanother good chapter. I like that Ward does a 180 on Matt and that he does challenge Leigh about how she feels and acts toward him. It's a step towards romance between them. Haha, I love that matt is jealous. He deserves it if he's been friends with her this long and then only starts to feel jealous and potentially want her/like her now that she may have found another guy. Love the knowing looks from Callie and Lily. Cliched though so true that your girlfriends notice all the boy interaction and what it means. Good luck with the next chapter.
Deppfan31 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseSo wow. This is one of my favorite chapters. As awful as this makes me sound, I love the idea of people using each other innocently to make someone else jealous. The key word there is innocently, because it's becoming quite obvious that Ward and Leigh aren't innocent... at least not completely innocent. And I completely one-hundred-percent agree with Ward! Matt should not treat her like he's got her on a leash! Gah!! Okay, yeah, maybe just because I'm a Ward supporter... but, lol, I REALLY liked this chapter. It was amazing. YAY!
Green.Winged.Mistress 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuse...Damn you! I'm starting to think it'd be nice if Ward and Leigh were together! What did you do in this chapter that makes me think that?! Grr! xP So now I'm fifty/fifty with her being with either Ward or Matt. Grr... Great chapter though :) I loves it! :D And the fact that its extra long JUST stopped me from throwing those rotten apples at you! ;P But PLEASE update sooner next time, ok? Pretty please with RIPE apples on top? :) -Katie
K.P. Crest 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseaw! i know leigh loves matt, but i wish she would end up with ward! ahh, i suppose i'll have to wait to find out how things turn out...pout but anyways, write more please!!
midnightbeauty 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseOh man, I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way, but I really don't want Matt and Leigh to get together. >.< But. Anyways. I can't wait for your next update, and I want to read more :) Kisses, midnightbeauty
fallingstar13 2008-07-23 ch 8,	abuseOh, Leigh. Listen to Ward. I can fully appreciate that you're desperately in love with him, but come on, backbone would be lovely. Not that there is a general lack of backbone, but just when Matt's concerned. For shame, for shame. Psh. It's too early for them to kiss anyway. She doesn't know for sure how Matt feels about her yet, so it would throw the triangle all out of whack if they kissed now. Random fact: I'm in love with Vampire Weekend! Oxford Comma makes me giggle every time I hear it. ...Except no one listens to them in the States. I don't know why, but it makes me sad. Leigh is my new favorite person for liking them. :)

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