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| Two Of Spades 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked how you didn't put spaces in between your words in some places, gave it a nice vibe. The last line was the best. |
| josh-u-rawr 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThis w really interesting. I enjoyed it. Very different fro what i've read before. I like the messages in this =) |