G'day,

Been a while.

I liked it. I think oftentimes people forget about what poetry is and where it came from. Poetry was first written to express beauty, and nothing is more beautiful than the natural world around us.
It's easy to write about nature, because there is nothing truly unbeautiful about it.

Reading it evokes nice images of this place, and although I'm afraid I've never been there, I can still feel what it is like.

Good work,
TMO

i lovelovelove the last line!
memorys always do seem like "thick air", i would have never thought to phrase it like that
well done, its really goodXD