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Jess 2008-03-07 . chapter 1
luv it!

not havin a good day =( readin ur stuff... makes feel betta

miss u x
Midnight Adrenaline 2008-03-07 . chapter 1
If I understood the guy is gay. Is that the secret? I'm guessing by this: "Stories broadcast all over the world
Showed those like him destroyed out of hate;" because a lot of people are homophobes. So they killed for it. And that seems to be a secret he can keep. Because if he's black, which people also get killed for being, he can't hide it. So did I guess the secret?
Sorry I rambled on. The point is I loved the message the poem gave. Keep writing.
Chi Yagami 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
aww, this one made me very sad... ;-; I may not be able to relate, but I understand what you're saying. [unless you told me what the secret was o0 then I missed it... ^^; ] very deep! you're a very good poet. oh and I like your profile poem too ^^
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