wow josh! its... yeah... u can prob guess... I LUV IT!

ive neva seen any1 write the way u do... hehe and ive been able 2 see u grow =)

luv u!

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I love it, it's not the kind of thing I would have thought to write this kind of poem. I really like the idea behind the poem.

wow... another deep Deep! poem from you =D

I like this piece... the bolding is interesting... and I love some of the lines "ever star that falls sits forgotten in the dreamer's hand" was one of my favorites

The only thing is although each stanza is really powerful they didnt flow into each other all that great... anyhow it's still a really wonderful piece

Hey!

Wow, this was really good. Normally, I'm not so into poetry myself, but this was really good. Okay, yeah I'm repeating myself. LoL, I do that. A lot. Ha-ha.

I liked it, I also liked the one on your profile page. Man, I wish I could write like that. My speech teacher does to. LoL.

Great job!

Kaiyako K.