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| IwasSmitten 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseAn instant image came to my mind as I read this - a lone woman almost steaming with life because she contrasts so much with the icy, marble, statue-like world around her. I like your writing style. To describe it as simply as possible (because it's not a simple thing to describe), it's a pleasing balance of sensuality, intelligence and depth. It seems as if you could read the works again and again, always seeing them in a new way. But then there's always something, some concept eluding you. Thanks for the review, by the way. |
| ChibiEii 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, thank you for your review. It made my evening (oh, how cliché I am today)! Next. Well, I'm not sure how to review poems, so I'll just write what I felt. Ok. So. I felt... loneliness and desperation, reading this poem. I don't know if that was your intention? Ah, well. =] I liked it! ^^, |