wow. loved it. :)

Even though the lines are separated, I think you are suppose to have a comma at the end. Otherwise you are saying it without any pauses. Unless you meant it that way. I don't care, I still thought it was really good!

I liked this :) I think the rhyming was a bit shaky in the beginning, but the last 13 lines were amazing :)

"It just made me wish

That every single one of them

Is like our first kiss"

beautiful ♥

I actually enjoyed this, although it seemed a little awkwardly written, if that makes any sense. Like, almost forced.
I really liked how relatable it seemed, like anyone could be experiencing it, & most of us have thought most of these same thoughts.
In the line, "Your sent so sweet", sent should be spelled scent. Sorry, I don't usually like to point out spelling, I think it makes me seem picky, but that just really stood out. Other than that, good.

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Sweet poem. However, you misspelled 'scent' as 'sent'

~Annoyance

I think (from what I've read that you're possibly a highschool student) and I agree that first kisses cause an incredibly amount of anxiety.

Some things about the poem:

I found myself getting a little lost in the lines. Maybe you could try punctuation? The lack of puncuation does give the reader a sense of anxiety (as a first kiss does), so maybe you intentionally did this. Just a thought.

Another issue I have with this poem is the rhyme scheme; it really sounded a bit forced at times. Rhyme is fantastic in poems, but remember that you can have some lines rhyme and others don't necessarily have to.

Really good job, though. Try messing around with the two things I said. I think there is great potential here!!

Katie

That was awesome. I loved the flow of it.

But what if I do disappoint you?

Now you are making me nervous for my first kiss. oh dear. hm... honestly, this question always pops out to me.

Before my heart gets pulled out further

By that love harpoon
(Very dark and beautiful)

Nice poem.

I loved it! I want to have my first kiss soon... Now I feel like I'm whining, so I'll just end this with "That was awesome!"

i liked it =]

absolutley lovely! (and totally right in the A/N about kisses too) though i do have to agree with the whole AABB thing. =]
very, very good poem. one of my favorites!

this is really good:D i have like dark poems hehe but i love these kind of poems to :D

I absolutely loved it! ^_^ It was so sweet. And I so agree with you on the first kiss thing, but better to wait and rewarded then to rush and ruining the experience right? ;)

really good ... I like the rhym (probably because I am not very good at it) it is good to mi it up somtimes like for instance AABB can get pretty bland but you seemed to get a good sceem up near the middle

B-

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Pretty good!! The thought of dissapointing someone you love or really like is a horrible feling...