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| Written 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseIt's kind of sad! But I like it. |
| doctor's diagnosis 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseShort and cute indeed. Hm, concrit: Punctuation, pretty much at the end of every line. and on the third to last line, it should be too not to. I do like the end though. |