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| daling 2008-11-26 ch 55, | aw |
| daling 2008-11-26 ch 1, | your style is great! please dont ever change it. haha! i intend to review on every chapter u got in this story. n if i dont,,well,,just noe that it means i was too engrossed. haha! |
| LupusAries 2008-11-08 ch 81, | those two are too funny! I like this new part of the story already! Its more funny and lighthearted than the original story who was more serious but good nonetheless. This story is a good contrast to it. |
| LupusAries 2008-11-08 ch 78, | those two are funny two read. As i said nicks a goner! Hmm she is dressed and has met her mr.-mindshattering already she just don´t know yet great read. |
| LupusAries 2008-11-08 ch 76, | those two are insanely funny...aha i think nick is a goner. |
| LupusAries 2008-11-08 ch 75, | those two should get together mister mischief and miss chaos this story is boudn to get interesting. God those two are funny...i hope you´ll have more scenes like that up your sleeve. oh oh naughty naughty Sal playing with nicks hopes like this. Hm i might like Sal and nick even more then Fay and adam, simply because they are soo funny. |
| LupusAries 2008-11-08 ch 74, | The Sal-nick scene was funny to read. I don´t think Jen and nick will last long. He´s to interested in Sal. good story you got me hooked again. And he´s right freckles are cute! |
| LupusAries 2008-11-08 ch 73, | a good and funny story! i like the chemistry between fay and adam very much. Sal is a funny character i like her whenever she is around its funny to read. This was the first of your stories i read, i just stopped reading it for some time. now i just had to refresh my knowledge a great story. I´m off to read on!*grins* |
| The Murder's Sister 2008-07-27 ch 79, | Aw! That made me feel all teary! God, you write so well Bev! I am dead jealous. I am hopefully uploading first chapter of new, abslutly amazing story. Please read it? ~Lillie PS Sorry that took so long to review - I was in Switzerland , touching base with an old friend. |
| AMM3485 2008-07-24 ch 73, | I absolutely loved it! Totally amazing! The ending was fitting and no part of the story seemed rushed and I loved every minute of it. I love the dynamic between Nick and Sally and I think that the relationship between Adam and Fay was incredible! Really really really awesome awesome job! |
| Dark-Angel29 2008-07-23 ch 73, | FINALLY! That was good, i enjoyed it. Sorry I'm a little delayed in my reading |
| AMM3485 2008-07-22 ch 19, | Okay, I can't take it anymore! I have to review right here before I read anymore. Your story is so awesome! I hope you know howtruly awesome it is, but if you don't, it's so f-ing awesome! I love it soo much. The chemistry is amazing. The characters are all believable and I absolutely love it! I'm going to keep reading, but I just had to say that! |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-07-22 ch 77, | Ouch. Poor Nick. Poor Sal! Its looking amazing though, though I doubt it will get as long as Welcome To Crete. Teehee. ~Lillie |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-07-21 ch 76, | Wow, really well written there, especially by bringing Nick's feelings in. I feel for him so badly! Anyway, what Nickelback song was Sal singing? I have four of his albums and I don't recognise it... (I thought I was a true fan, but I obviously ain't, which sucks). I am also really sorry I didn't reply, I was in St. Petersburg, which has no internet cafés where you don't have to drink coffee with vodka. So I was internect less. But except for the lack of internet conectinon, Russia was amazing. It's number two now on p-lace I would like to live, it's so beautful. I am truly smitten *sigh*. |
| Bigego 2008-07-16 ch 72, | this chapter is so hot and steamy! i hope id meet a man like adam one day :) its weird, my name is faye but with an 'e' xD |