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daling
2008-11-26
ch 55,
aw
daling
2008-11-26
ch 1,
your style is great!
please dont ever change it. haha!
i intend to review on every chapter u got in this story.
n if i dont,,well,,just noe that it means i was too engrossed. haha!
LupusAries
2008-11-08
ch 81,
those two are too funny! I like this new part of the story already! Its more funny and lighthearted than the original story who was more serious but good nonetheless. This story is a good contrast to it.
LupusAries
2008-11-08
ch 78,
those two are funny two read. As i said nicks a goner! Hmm she is dressed and has met her mr.-mindshattering already she just don´t know yet great read.
LupusAries
2008-11-08
ch 76,
those two are insanely funny...aha i think nick is a goner.
LupusAries
2008-11-08
ch 75,
those two should get together mister mischief and miss chaos this story is boudn to get interesting. God those two are funny...i hope you´ll have more scenes like that up your sleeve. oh oh naughty naughty Sal playing with nicks hopes like this. Hm i might like Sal and nick even more then Fay and adam, simply because they are soo funny.
LupusAries
2008-11-08
ch 74,
The Sal-nick scene was funny to read. I don´t think Jen and nick will last long. He´s to interested in Sal. good story you got me hooked again. And he´s right freckles are cute!
LupusAries
2008-11-08
ch 73,
a good and funny story! i like the chemistry between fay and adam very much. Sal is a funny character i like her whenever she is around its funny to read.

This was the first of your stories i read, i just stopped reading it for some time. now i just had to refresh my knowledge a great story.

I´m off to read on!*grins*
The Murder's Sister
2008-07-27
ch 79,
Aw! That made me feel all teary! God, you write so well Bev! I am dead jealous. I am hopefully uploading first chapter of new, abslutly amazing story. Please read it?
~Lillie
PS Sorry that took so long to review - I was in Switzerland , touching base with an old friend.
AMM3485
2008-07-24
ch 73,
I absolutely loved it! Totally amazing! The ending was fitting and no part of the story seemed rushed and I loved every minute of it. I love the dynamic between Nick and Sally and I think that the relationship between Adam and Fay was incredible! Really really really awesome awesome job!
Dark-Angel29
2008-07-23
ch 73,
FINALLY! That was good, i enjoyed it. Sorry I'm a little delayed in my reading
AMM3485
2008-07-22
ch 19,
Okay, I can't take it anymore! I have to review right here before I read anymore. Your story is so awesome! I hope you know howtruly awesome it is, but if you don't, it's so f-ing awesome! I love it soo much. The chemistry is amazing. The characters are all believable and I absolutely love it! I'm going to keep reading, but I just had to say that!
Lady Macbeth's Murderer
2008-07-22
ch 77,
Ouch. Poor Nick. Poor Sal! Its looking amazing though, though I doubt it will get as long as Welcome To Crete. Teehee.
~Lillie
Lady Macbeth's Murderer
2008-07-21
ch 76,
Wow, really well written there, especially by bringing Nick's feelings in. I feel for him so badly!
Anyway, what Nickelback song was Sal singing? I have four of his albums and I don't recognise it... (I thought I was a true fan, but I obviously ain't, which sucks). I am also really sorry I didn't reply, I was in St. Petersburg, which has no internet cafés where you don't have to drink coffee with vodka. So I was internect less. But except for the lack of internet conectinon, Russia was amazing. It's number two now on p-lace I would like to live, it's so beautful. I am truly smitten *sigh*.
Bigego
2008-07-16
ch 72,
this chapter is so hot and steamy!

i hope id meet a man like adam one day :)

its weird, my name is faye but with an 'e'

xD
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