ishara~
a very spicy story that needs more of a proper intro...a bit more detail before the kissing part...but i love it ...
and of course encourage u to xpand it !! i really wanna hear more...

Your short love stories are so cute! I'm developing a hunger for them! I'm always so sad when i get to the end that i refuse to read the last word and start over again, then i have to accept the fact that the story is over. YOUR STORIES ARE AWSOME! ^_^

aw this is really cute. i cant even really say why, it just captured me. it was really good.

one thing i missed: who is pablo exactly? does he live with her? im not quite sure.

anyway, i really loved it. nice job.