Hmm, this was okay. I feel like it should be a longer-novel length story, rather than in three parts, simply because some parts feel rushed. So, maybe you could work this into a longer novel? May be a good idea. Otherwise, it was good.
Faith

I liked it. Keep it up and update soon :)
Faith

Techincally, she would've been dismissed off the case anyways. But, I like where this is going. I would suggest slowing down, don't show us too many things too soon. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith