"Beautiful princess of calamity." Amazing line!
"Sleep." The only comfort a widow can find. That is very profound :D

I liked this. The title was really interesting and the piece was just as intriguing. I love the ending... those last two lines were absolutely perfect. It's very sad and well done. The only thing I might say is you end it with a period even though the whole piece is missing punctuation. I would either get rid of it all or add the rest in. Other than that it's really well done.

This was sad, but I enjoyed reading it.
~SomethingNifty

This speaks a lot for the incredible pain of loss and grief. I am really impressed.

You're a great poet!



P.S. Thank you so much for your sweet responses! :D

Wow. this was really good. it was so descriptive! i loved it, you portrayed the emotions really well, everything was just very well written. nice job.
~BJ