I like how you've done this one, it could have been better in my poion, but to change anything or even make it longer or shorter, seems to cleanse whatever feeling was there before. Don't worry I can still feel it even now.

I really liked how you wrote this poem. The wording was done nicely. I love how Heart Mind and Soul are in lines all by themselves. Keep writing!

=) The cleverness of you amuses me!
~SomethingNifty

Beautiful! I especially love how you emphasize "heart", "mind" and "soul" with the lines with three powerful words that contradict each other. Not to mention, they are some of the most important aspects in one's life.

-D.L. XD