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| SEMMU 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job. I think I'll add this to my favorites. I must confess, I particularly love this poem because it evokes my personal "serenity in solitude", which I found atop Sam's Knob in the Pisgah Mountains of North Carolina. I wish I could share the warble sounds and the vista with each and every living soul; yet, I believe each person must experience their own. |
| Yamaraja 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusePerhaps you should consider drinking tea.I love it!What a wonderful poem. |
| Painted.Illusion 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautifully written, impossibly perfect poem. Great imagery and description. Hat off to you. Could you check out some of my work? Thanks. |
| MidnightRequiem 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuse"Time resumes its locomotion at full speed, Bellowing espresso-shot puffs of steam." Wow! Great personification. |