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| UnDesiredRomance 2008-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseAw. I love the analogies. :]] |
| Lady Fingers 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abusethis is sad but cute |
| Isca 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! |
| Lancet 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's funny how you would leave a review like that on one of my poems when you clearly state in your bio that you don't care what someone thinks and that you don't try to please everyone with what you write. Well, congratulations, neither do I and I state that in my bio. But thanks for the lack of thought you did put into the review. You could have done constructive criticism! But you didn't, did you? My poetry and stories are sort of me venting and getting my thoughts out. I never said I was anything special, and I just happen to really like the concept of the grim reaper. But yeah, again, thanks for the lack of thought on your part. I just quickly scanned some of your stuff and hey! What a big heaping pile of hypocrisy on YOUR part. And, just for the record, you're not a bad writer. |
| kloun doll 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot, the stuff about robot and human being love is kinda curious. |
| rippling iris 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusefor some reason this made me sad. i think it's because robots are totally emotionless, they couldn't care less whether they get fixed or not. so even though the narrator has this great person to help her out when she's down, it's not like she really cares about him. i dunno. maybe i'm over analyzing it. i liked the analogy though and your style is amazing. |
| Johannas mirror 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI love that idea... |
| Moonlightsonnetgrrl 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseThat;s interesting, it made me think of "I, Robot". Thanks for the review, i know it ended rather quickly. A lot of my poems are like that. It's very rare for me to think of a really good poem, so that's the kind of stuff i come up with. heh, can't be helped right? Anyway i'm going to read more of your poems =) |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like how you start with you as the robot and end with the other person as the mechanic.. that was nice.. I also love the detail you go into about your insides... Just a few thoughts... I might start a new stanza with and you because the idea changed a bit.. and also it seemed odd you use You know in all but one part... and I'm not sure why clockwork's is possessive... But still it's a really amazingly detailed extended metaphor.. beautiful job PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseclever! its really very goodXD |