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Kristen 2008-08-16 ch 8, anon.	abuseOh please, please update again soon! I'm really enjoying this, and I can't wait to find out how they settle their issues.
Carina 2008-08-12 ch 8,	abuseThis was such a great chapter. I know you think it's short and you were talking about adding more to it, but I think you should just continue on from this point. I'm also glad you didn't make Esme just storm off without explaining that it was her brother. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is one of my most favorite stories (and although I have like 50 some on my favorite stories list I mean it about this one, and I have a short list of favorite authors). Hope to see another update soon!
Duchess Treacle 2008-08-12 ch 8,	abuseimpresse some of the suddenly realised their in love romances are getting old aS THE SITE IS POPULARED WITH THEM. GREAT descriptions and vocabulary but only thing is some of the language doesn't fit the period bring on next chapter
kiki19857 2008-07-29 ch 8,	abuseyay! you are back! I have been wondering what have happened to you! I can't believe that her husband thought that her brother is her 'lover'! Anyway, hope they both work things out tomorrow in this story!
Queen of Laughs 2008-07-28 ch 8,	abusegreat chapter!! i hope taran doesnt think that Esme is lying about david being her brother... that would be a bummer... i cant wait for more!! and more interaction between the two!! post asap!
LeenaElle 2008-07-27 ch 8,	abuseI don't think there was anything wrong with this chapter! It wasn't too short, so, don't even think about it. Sometimes, short chapters are refreshing, and like my college professors always said, if you can say it short, do. So, I think you got everything into this chapter you needed to, it had it's climax, and Taran realized that he's retarted, and so did Esme...with the moving of the furniture. I'm still really loving the story, and I was so excited when I saw it posted, it certainly was a welcome surprise. I hope you won't have the same kind of problems with the next chapter, because I would love to not have to wait so long! No pressure, but if you need help, send me a pm, I'd be happy to help in any way I can!
JoBen 2008-07-25 ch 8, anon.	abusegood chapter. I am glad to see several of the misunderstandings between them cleared up and for Esme to have handled Taran's outbursts so well. I think Taran still has some truths to learn about his wife. I am looking forward to seeing his change of heart about the marriage and Esme.
WhimsicalRhapsody 2008-07-25 ch 8, anon.	abuseMeh, I'm too lazy to log in.. but anyway. This story has so much merit, and it's very obvious that you've done your homework in terms of history and the development of two very hard headed characters. This may be a really slow train, but I think I can deal with having a very intelligent novel on FP, despite the usual nature. I can't wait to read the rest of it!
maidengarnet 2008-07-25 ch 8,	abuseWrite more! Write more, darnit! You've kept me waiting too long!
Ck90 2008-07-25 ch 8,	abuseMen are so ignorant sometimes! You would think that he would be proud of his wife for taking and interest in his affairs. It was a bit funny to read what taran thought was her lover. Does she think that horribly of her? Seriously.I love David he is so kind and thoughtfull. I like the was this chapter turned out! Update Soon!
grumpirah 2008-07-25 ch 8,	abuseWelcome back and congratulations on graduating but you must keep these updates up. Looking forward to reading more!
MadPad 2008-07-25 ch 8, anon.	abuseI loved it :D And I can't wait 'til romance blossoms between Taran and Esme! But I have to say that I was kind of hoping that Esme would be so hurt about what Taran said and run away (maybe even cry a little :D) and then Taran could have come and consoled her :D Still, I loved it :D And I hope you'll update soonER!
Ck90 2008-06-11 ch 7,	abuseYeah my review is a bit late but better late than never right? First off I would like to say that I love the way that Esme took charge! That letter thief was just a tad creepy! I can't wait to read what Taran will say!! You'd think that he's be gratefull that she is actaully taking an interest in the estates but no! MEN!! they are never grateful I mean she is practically taking care of the place with all her est interest at heart and in comes her husband ( in name only ) being an ungratefull son of a gun and what is she supposed to do? I say fight fire with ice technically it might work no idea how but it might!! Seriously the guy with the hand CREPY! ANYWAY GOOD LUCK AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
leemya 2008-06-07 ch 7,	abuseGreat Story! Would you be continuing this story? I hope so!
Gimstan 2008-06-06 ch 7,	abuseI really like this and hope you update soon. It really is a breath of fresh air originality wise. - Gimstan

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