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| Galadh Niniel 2008-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful with a slight tinge of melancholy. |
| aya's notebook 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abusei'm impressed ;) **off to read more |
| miscellanea 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was really beatiful. The one image that really caught my eye was in the first stanza when you talk about clouds tumbling out of the sky. How strange to envision! Keep Writing writing writing... xx Miscellanea |
| white tigeris 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseamazing & beautiful. O_O |
| The Postscript 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseMmhm .. really beautiful imagery. I think, as a reader, there's lots of directions that you can take this. It's very interesting how you direct the poem with very particular phrases and images, and yet there's so much room left for imagination. It's really a delicate, beautiful combination. Keep writing, k. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely amazing poem. So much growth in your poetry. Excellent job. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Aquafied 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusewe are all angels at one point. |
| perpetual questions 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusei like the abstractions and imagery. great piece. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusereally beautiful descriptions... and the whole sky angel thing was really amazing... i liked the format too... II kinda wished their was a question mark though in that one line.. anyhow awesome piece |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusethis reminds me of ee cummings. you have very descriptive poetry. "fated upon sun kissed cheeks" lovely. |