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gracie.domingo 2008-08-03 . chapter 1
Beautiful.
Galadh Niniel 2008-06-13 . chapter 1
Beautiful with a slight tinge of melancholy.
aya's notebook 2008-06-09 . chapter 1
i'm impressed ;) **off to read more
miscellanea 2008-05-18 . chapter 1
This was really beatiful. The one image that really caught my eye was in the first stanza when you talk about clouds tumbling out of the sky. How strange to envision! Keep Writing writing writing...

xx Miscellanea
white tigeris 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
amazing & beautiful. O_O
The Postscript 2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Mmhm .. really beautiful imagery. I think, as a reader, there's lots of directions that you can take this. It's very interesting how you direct the poem with very particular phrases and images, and yet there's so much room left for imagination. It's really a delicate, beautiful combination. Keep writing, k.
Princess-anna57 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
Absolutely amazing poem. So much growth in your poetry. Excellent job. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
Aquafied 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
we are all angels
at one point.
a silenced revolution 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
i like the abstractions and imagery. great piece.
simpleplan13 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
really beautiful descriptions... and the whole sky angel thing was really amazing... i liked the format too... II kinda wished their was a question mark though in that one line.. anyhow awesome piece
East-0f-Eden 2008-03-06 . chapter 1
this reminds me of ee cummings. you have very descriptive poetry. "fated upon sun kissed cheeks" lovely.
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