| Reviews for descent |
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bahaghari 8/3/08 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
Galadh Niniel 6/13/08 . chapter 1Beautiful with a slight tinge of melancholy. |
aya's notebook 6/9/08 . chapter 1i'm impressed ;) **off to read more |
miscellanea 5/18/08 . chapter 1This was really beatiful. The one image that really caught my eye was in the first stanza when you talk about clouds tumbling out of the sky. How strange to envision! Keep Writing writing writing... xx Miscellanea |
white tigeris 4/8/08 . chapter 1amazing & beautiful. O_O |
The Postscript 3/21/08 . chapter 1Mmhm .. really beautiful imagery. I think, as a reader, there's lots of directions that you can take this. It's very interesting how you direct the poem with very particular phrases and images, and yet there's so much room left for imagination. It's really a delicate, beautiful combination. Keep writing, k. |
Princess-anna57 3/14/08 . chapter 1Absolutely amazing poem. So much growth in your poetry. Excellent job. Write on! Anna _ |
Aquafied 3/6/08 . chapter 1we are all angels at one point. |
a silenced revolution 3/6/08 . chapter 1i like the abstractions and imagery. great piece. |
simpleplan13 3/6/08 . chapter 1really beautiful descriptions... and the whole sky angel thing was really amazing... i liked the format too... II kinda wished their was a question mark though in that one line.. anyhow awesome piece |
East-0f-Eden 3/6/08 . chapter 1this reminds me of ee cummings. you have very descriptive poetry. "fated upon sun kissed cheeks" lovely. |