Beautiful.

Beautiful with a slight tinge of melancholy.

i'm impressed ;) **off to read more

This was really beatiful. The one image that really caught my eye was in the first stanza when you talk about clouds tumbling out of the sky. How strange to envision! Keep Writing writing writing...

xx Miscellanea

amazing & beautiful. O_O

Mmhm .. really beautiful imagery. I think, as a reader, there's lots of directions that you can take this. It's very interesting how you direct the poem with very particular phrases and images, and yet there's so much room left for imagination. It's really a delicate, beautiful combination. Keep writing, k.

Absolutely amazing poem. So much growth in your poetry. Excellent job. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

we are all angels
at one point.

i like the abstractions and imagery. great piece.

really beautiful descriptions... and the whole sky angel thing was really amazing... i liked the format too... II kinda wished their was a question mark though in that one line.. anyhow awesome piece

this reminds me of ee cummings. you have very descriptive poetry. "fated upon sun kissed cheeks" lovely.