Reviews for Bring forth the pain

GothiKayra
2008-03-06
ch 1,

abuseO_O Are you ok? Don't get me wrong, I really liked it... Just, omg.

Manju
2008-03-06
ch 1,

abuseHmm... WTF brought this on? We haven't talked in over a week and all of a sudden, this poem is written. What's going on?? You probably won't tell me anyway. So i hope things get better. As you know, if you need to vent, i am here.

As for a review of the poem itself, I think it's full of emotions and you conveyed the anger truly beautifully. My friend Tabitha says she likes the repetition in it because it adds emphasis. I agree. We love the second-to-last line "Give death to all but freedom to none, bound to flesh for eternity and more..." because it seems to sum everything up and basically dooms humanity to hell. Good job as usual, keep it up...but let's hope there will be less angry poems. :-\

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