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| perpetual questions 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abusei agree with your other review about the period. great haiku, and the last line finishes nicely. -adrian |
| Midnight In Eden 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseOne thing: if you've got a colon on the second line, just pop a period on the last to round it out. Otherwise, a simple but effective haiku. Nicely done. Midnight |