Reviews for Past, Presant, The Future

rachely 2008-05-12 ch 8,	abuseA little jumpy, but still good. Check grammar and whatnot too. Still enjoy this though. :)
rachely 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseThis seems like it'll be a fun story. Hope to see more of it soon :)
Lindy 2008-03-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery interesting, very personal. Hope to read more. Just one thing, not sure if you're anal about spelling/grammar and stuff but you wrote 'here' instead of 'hear' [4th paragraph] & 'plus trying not [to] leave out the snog in my bedroom' [not quite sure what you wanted to convey there]. I also reckon you could've used a few commas here and there but I ain't fussed. I can just tell this is going to be a cliche, funny story. One of those light-hearted high school stories. Prove me right, prove me wrong, just make it interesting. Hah, hope you can update soon !
HGiel 2008-03-07 ch 2,	abuseGood job on this. I like this, it's fun.