 VampiressAJ 2009-03-15 . chapter 37I loved it. I know I have a special man because even though my temper isnt as bad as going off on everyone in my line of site he can still putn up with my craziness. lol I loved it and i loved the ending too. Kudos~ |
 VampiressAJ 2009-03-13 . chapter 36i love this whole story. im adding it to my faves and everything. make sure you update soon ok~ |
 VampiressAJ 2009-03-13 . chapter 8ok im in the process of reading this but the basshunter thing struck me. I lvoe basshunter and I didnt know anyone else knew of it. but yeah anyways im reading on~ ill review more later |
 ren 2009-03-01 . chapter 4 u need to use double quotations instead of one !! it gets very confusing otherwise.. punctuation and grammar needs to be checked like -> 'Well then Tia as I just saved your ** coz you saved mine I better get back to class I said to the teacher I would just be going to the toilet' I nod.
it could be revised to be ->"Well then Tia as I just saved your ** coz you saved mine, I better get back to class I told the teacher I would just be going to the toilet" I nod.
maybe u can make the dialogues in italic or the thought process, so it's easier to differenciate
i'm starting to love the story .. Tia scares me a bit.. but i can see the story going places. |
 seeking stardom 2009-02-21 . chapter 33Very nice. :D |
 Danii909 2009-02-10 . chapter 32heey this is an awesome story, absolutely LOVED it.
hope too see more chpaters soon |
 NattieLove 2009-01-22 . chapter 1i cant wait to read this... and all ur other ones... is it ok if i save it just to read it? |
 divya 2008-07-02 . chapter 29 Hey there,
Sure u took lota time to write this.. hav been waiting for ages for u to update :) neways nice chappie with lots of typos though...
Update soon.. |
 rachely 2008-07-01 . chapter 29I didn't think this chapter was too bad. I actually really liked the ending. :P I think you should get a beta to help you out and rewrite it eventually. Sometimes it's hard to follow what's going on or to really really get into the story because of grammar and of the sort. |
 jaindivya86 2008-06-09 . chapter 28hey no update for a vry long time...
cmmon ur readers r waiting.. :) |
 rachely 2008-06-01 . chapter 28wow..hot and steamy. xD
hope you update soon.
and thanks for the explanation behind Justin moving out. :) |
 rachely 2008-06-01 . chapter 27wow. this was good. i'd like to know more about justins house issue. why exactly did he get kicked out? |
 jaindivya86 2008-05-28 . chapter 23Hey there,
Nice stuff u got here... English is a lil problem but the story is good... i hope u r in a habit of updating ur stories fast enough coz i really wanna know how this one ends... interesting.. keep writing.. |
 rachely 2008-05-27 . chapter 23she isn't upset with Justin anymore after what happened at the party last night? i'm glad she is but it was like you forgot about the little fight. Good Chapter. :) |
 rachely 2008-05-22 . chapter 20aw :( Poor Justin. James is a creep. Good Chapter. :) |