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| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-09-02 ch 25,  | abusehm, wouldn't Arra know Ren's scent? or am i confusing names? anyway, great chapter can't wait for the next one |
| Estelin 2008-09-01 ch 24, | abusethis was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-08-14 ch 23, | abuseexcellent chapter as usual, a bit on the short side, but still very good one thing, in the 11th paragraph down, you put "My Pack has some a long way" i assume you meant come rather than some |
| Icy Vampire Chick 2008-07-11 ch 22, | abuseREN ! OMG ! I had no idea that you'd finished the story before this and posted a new one ! If I'd known sooner, I would have reviewed every single chapter ! :( I really thought you gave up on all of Arra's stories. I admit I was upset at first - I seem to be addicted to Arra and her witty remarks and her uber-cool-but-hazardous lifestyle - when I didn't see an update for some time, but something prompted me to look you up today, and my, my, what a total shocker ! Arra is back, with a new story ! Aick ! I mentally kicked myself in the butt several times for not seeing this sooner. Where have you BEEN ?! I really missed all your ficlets...And why, why did you kill Edward ? He was my favorite character besides Damon and Ren...-sigh- Those points aside, I think this story is great, if not better than the rest. I can't wait to see what happens next and when Jimmy will challenge Damon for the Alpha status. Well, good luck writing the next chappie then. Hope you've found or will find a good publisher for the Arra Griffith Series ! ~Jo |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-07-04 ch 22, | abuseinteresting, defiantly interesting |
| Estelin 2008-06-29 ch 20, | abuseexcellent. keep up the good work and writing. |
| Estelin 2008-06-26 ch 19, | abusethere are to many emotions to say about this chapter all being excelent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more |
| Fallen-Agent 2008-06-26 ch 18, | abuseOMG! I cant.. I just cant grasp that Edward is dead. I cant..He cant be gone. He just cant.. |
| Estelin 2008-06-25 ch 18, | abuseThis was one of the best and excellent chapters that i have read in the arra series. keep up the excellent writing and work. i can not wait for more. |
| Estelin 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abusethis was an excellent chapter. i can not wait to read more. keep up the excellent work and writing. |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-06-24 ch 17, | abusehe's dead? he's not really dead, is he? now i'm sad... happy you updated... but sad |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-06-03 ch 15, | abusesomeone else will probably point this out too but unless arra is suddenly a pirate werewolf this sentences is in correct: "She saved me son, helped me out of a place where Hell pretty much covered it, saved my ** from Elizabeth and now is fighting beside me once again. I guess I really could trust her." otherwise typically awesome chapter |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-05-22 ch 14, | abusewow intense |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-05-17 ch 12, | abuseyou're not really gonna kill Edward are you? this chap was sad... |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2008-05-01 ch 11, | abuseloved the chap not much criticism to give keep writing you're awesome |