this was excellent. keep up the excellent work and writing. i can not wait for the next installment. i love how you always leave the story in a cliff hanger

...-_-'
PMing mow...

Wow...you're pregnant? Congrats! Judging by how you had portrayed your main character in your story, I know you'd make a great mother.

If it's too much hassle, you needn't update anytime soon, but please don't give up on this story - some of us here actually read it and can't stop loving every single bit of it along the way. ;)

Take care!

~Jo

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more. it will be different not having arra as alpha. congrats on the pregnancy

awesome fight scene
the chapter was a bit short
but i envy your fight scenes above all others
great chapter
this story confuses me greatly
and depresses me much,
but i must say i love you're writing

I have read all of the stories so far and they are freaking amazing keep it coming!

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can wait for an eternity for a chapter like this

hm, wouldn't Arra know Ren's scent?
or am i confusing names?
anyway, great chapter
can't wait for the next one

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

excellent chapter as usual, a bit on the short side, but still very good
one thing, in the 11th paragraph down, you put "My Pack has some a long way" i assume you meant come rather than some

REN ! OMG ! I had no idea that you'd finished the story before this and posted a new one ! If I'd known sooner, I would have reviewed every single chapter ! :(

I really thought you gave up on all of Arra's stories. I admit I was upset at first - I seem to be addicted to Arra and her witty remarks and her uber-cool-but-hazardous lifestyle - when I didn't see an update for some time, but something prompted me to look you up today, and my, my, what a total shocker ! Arra is back, with a new story !

Aick ! I mentally kicked myself in the butt several times for not seeing this sooner. Where have you BEEN ?! I really missed all your ficlets...And why, why did you kill Edward ? He was my favorite character besides Damon and Ren...-sigh-

Those points aside, I think this story is great, if not better than the rest. I can't wait to see what happens next and when Jimmy will challenge Damon for the Alpha status. Well, good luck writing the next chappie then. Hope you've found or will find a good publisher for the Arra Griffith Series !

~Jo

interesting, defiantly interesting

excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

there are to many emotions to say about this chapter all being excelent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more

OMG! I cant.. I just cant grasp that Edward is dead. I cant..He cant be gone. He just cant..