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| The Hippie Nerd 2008-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseA lovely piece, such an interesting flow to it that works quite well. The repeated use of the one-word line (particularly the word "Follow") has a great effect and does a good job giving the poem structure. Really good imagery and poetic devices throughout, I especially like the line "Your sanity in strings." Short but strong! The last several lines are all quite strong and bring the poem to a powerful finish. Good job! |
| TT-da-lamanite 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abusewow, I thought of you as basicly a writter, but what writter doesnt write poetry? |
| MeredithBlueEyes 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusePowerful imagery. Good job. ;) |