Reviews for Dragon Flare 2: Flare in Training

HollyBlair 2008-03-22 ch 4,	This was definately one of the better chapters. I think they're getting better as I go. I'd love to read more detailed descriptions of your characters. I just have one spelling complaint (I'm not really one to talk, am I?): It's "laid" not "layed".
HollyBlair 2008-03-22 ch 3,	This was a good chapter. The whole troofing (is that right?) to Boston thing was a little confusing, as was Flare going through the change into a vampire. But it was a good chapter, and you left me in suspense about Lilly's condition. Good job.
HollyBlair 2008-03-22 ch 2,	Grammatically, this is better than the first story. The plotline is good, too. However, the grammer is still lacking, and the fact that all the dialogue is in one paragraph instead of seperate lines makes it difficult to read. However, it is coming along well, and I think it's got a lot of potential.
HollyBlair 2008-03-06 ch 1,	Sounds good. Can't wait for the rest. And thanks for the dedication!