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| simpleplan13 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseI like the last line... and I also like the repetition...you have a period at the end, but no punctuation anywhere else, which seemed odd... I would add punctuation to the rest of the stanzas, but thats just me.. nice job PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile) |