Reviews for Why do you Cry? - FictionPress.com

Ecaterina Dracula 2008-10-09 ch 1,	... What happened to her man?
fukaimoriMidori 2008-03-10 ch 1,	The rhyme is ever so slightly stretched over some lines, but it's great! :D I love the idea, I can visualise this scene so well...
Froststar11 2008-03-07 ch 1,	Hey Pie-chan! I love this poem, slightly sad as it is. laughs I've read worse that you've come up with in that category! Seriously though, good job. I liked it. Congrats on finally getting a fictionpress account!
lygophobic lullabies 2008-03-06 ch 1,	Not only did you use the word beautiful too many times, I know you repeated it on purpose at times, but other times you didn't, you also described a totally cliché girl and had cliché themes. I'm not a fan of this one.
TheStoryteller19 2008-03-06 ch 1,	Yay!...I mean boo, so sad... I like this poem a lot. It's so vivid - and it actually rhymes! I tend to not like poetry that doesn't rhyme, so yeah...