Reviews for Internal Murderer

Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-03-06 ch 1,	I think this is an interesting poem. The first lines are really amazing. At the point about the knife it starts to lose its intensity and power. Maybe work on the words and phrasing. Also, I don't think you need the lines. Have it as a one verse poem. Nice work :)
lygophobic lullabies 2008-03-06 ch 1,	I don't like the rhyme at the end, not sure if that was an accident or not, but I didn't really like it. But, I thought the rest was really great, it makes sense and is true to a vulnerable human state.