Wow. I really liked it. You should feel genuinely loved because I hardly enjoy poems that don't have rhymes. All mine do. Which probably makes me a poser poet. Or something.

But it was really good. Nice connection and flow.

I love how the beginning and ending are very similar it ties the piece together well.. I also like the idea of a patchwork smile it's really great.. my favorite part is the part about her stories.. that was really great

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I think formatting could be improved - it might read more easily when left-aligned rather than centred.

I love the imagery and the line "And graze your lips", it really embodies the essence of the poem I think.

I enjoyed reading this.