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| ieszephyr 2008-06-08 ch 1,  | abusenice job! |
| Daydream Nation 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseI love it. It's addicting, and the dialog is pretty funny at times. |
| TimeTraveler4 2008-04-30 ch 4, | abuseHey! JAKE NEEDS TO BE WITH AARON! They are too CUTE not to be together! plus, you're totally hinting it in this last chapter... I mean, i like Cory but Jake's better!! Anyway, I love this last chapter... You need to answer all of Aaron's questions because it's important! I am so confused!! Anyway, keep writing! and UPDATE SOON!! |
| Kyuuketsuki-Yaoi Fan- 2008-04-29 ch 4, | abuseWOO! [Clap Clap Clap] Great Story! Update Soon Please Its An Awesome Story. |
| Kirrima 2008-04-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseBeautiful story so far! Can't wait to read the next chapter ^^ Keep writing! |
| gummybaby 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuseawesome as always...and a rock in his pocket? that was great. lol. |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuse“Winters?” Jake raised an eyebrow. “The man-whore?” lolz LOVED this line! XD Great work! I absolutly adored it...again. XD |
| TimeTraveler4 2008-04-19 ch 3, | abuseok so sadly, this is going to be a short review because i cannot say anything bad about this at all. All I want is THE NEXT CHAPTER!! seriously, you are a good writer! |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2008-04-19 ch 3, | abuseO do I detect some romance stirring? XD I'm so curious about Jake's past...and I absoluting LOVE all of the ideas you came up for this other world. You did an amazing job with this story line! |
| gummybaby 2008-04-06 ch 3, | abusewoah...that was trippy...I'm not gonna lie, the storm part freaked me out. This is such a cool story though...I want more...please? |
| TimeTraveler4 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abusehey, sorry for taking so long to review! I swear i read it all lol! Anyway, I love your writing style and I especially love how you. Have captured my two favorite genres: fantasy and romance. I love the set up and I expecially love the characters! I can't wait to find out what is up with the rose petals and the cool power thing that happened! Its kinda odd that so far as we can tell, the only significance in the time 3:33 is that his father left him at that time, plus its all threes.. I guess I'm just hoping for more significance behind that time.. I dont know, I'm obsessed with significance, expecially when it comes to time because I'm also obsessed with that! Anyway I love the cool stuff that Is happening to Aaron even though it might not be a good thing! I have to say that Cory is my absolute favorite character though! LOL I hope his name is Cory because I didn't look... Anyway, keep writing and I can't wait for more! Please update soon! Dont be too afraid to PM me if your stuck on anything..(writers block) I'll just supply random ideas and you go off of them LOL so its still just you writing... You dont have to though.. Update soon! |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2008-03-14 ch 2, | abuseO! suspence. XD I loved it! I've already fallen in love with your characters and I'm glad to see the beginning of a great plot. Can't wait for more! |
| kiki 2008-03-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseand then? |
| gummybaby 2008-03-12 ch 2, | abuseAh! You can't leave me there...I need to know what happens. This a really good story, I can't wait to see where you take it. |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazing. How did you get all that emotion in one short piece? You did a really fantastic job on this one. I'm so faveing you. XD |