Wow. This is really powerful for such a simple structure and subject.
Greatly written

This one is very cool, I can relate to this because i tend to write things to people that they never read because i end up changing my mind. lol i like this one a lot.

I like the alliteration in the third stanza... in the fourth stanza I was confused that you switched from pages to words.. what are the 15 words? the image of smoke rising in spirals was nice as well... and the ending I absolutely loved... really nice job

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