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| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseI love it, the last two lines are just so powerful they capture the essence of this poem marvelously. |
| carousel chorus 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseoh wow. this is beautiful. i love the last two lines, their so powerful, and so true. amazing job! x.CC |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. Very...broad and understanding I suppose. |
| alicer 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, yay. I like good poetry. Idk what to say...Okay. So, while it didn't TOUCH ME in the way poetry can...touch young girls (at night?) it was VERY VERY well-written, which is especially unique for a poem that rhymes. As I have just discovered you I think I'm going to go read some more of your poetry now. :) |
| Ramenluver 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI like it, kiddo. Certainly has a deeper meaning. ^ ^ -Ramen |
| In the Rye 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusenice work. i like its honesty. |