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| Incurable Adoration 2008-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent! Couldn't have been better. |
| Featherfall 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | abuse*giggles* I know. Commercials are so overdone. It's beyond just promoting the product; it does nothing more at that point than make it seem thoroughly ridiculous. If anything, you feel a stronger urge to change the channel than to buy whatever's being advertised, it's so darn annoying. Bye. |
| naningxoxo 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseo.O Lol. That was pretty funny and interesting. My Herbal Essence shampoo never made me act that way. Awesome job with the class prompt. :] |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseFunny stuff! (: I wasn't sure of where you were going with this until I reached the punchline. Then again, I'm half-asleep right about now. The humor jolted me a little awake, though. I can completely relate to this! |
| LunarGuardianPhoenix 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseHaha! Dosen't do it to me either. I wonder if those advertisment actualy get people to buy the shampoos. Ah well. Lovely job. I brought a smile to my face. |