 Saya25 2008-04-11 . chapter 1Good job on the poem:D |
 doctor's diagnosis 2008-03-08 . chapter 1I didn't really like the use of the word "nut". I don't know, it just didn't fit to me. But the rhyming with cut gives it purpose, so yeah. |
 Cloudsinthesky 2008-03-07 . chapter 1Nice job with this, I really like the ending. |
 Zigity 2008-03-07 . chapter 1Wow, amazingly written.
Great job. =) |
 sarahhh 2008-03-07 . chapter 1 anne! this is amazing |
 In the Rye 2008-03-06 . chapter 1they don't put you in solitary for cutting. they put you in the recovery ward with the rest of the depressed people and make you go to group. they make you turn in your belts and shoe laces, and won't let you have drawstrings on any of your clothes. you go into a room thats unable to be locked. you have to turn in your plastic-ware at the end of every meal and open your mouth and lift your tongue to make sure you swallow your meds. know what your writing about before you write something this ridiculously inaccurate. |