Wow. You used this to bash Bush. Congratualations on chucking your political beliefs into a story. Quel mature. Adios, respect.

(Not saying I'm an uber-Bush fan, I'm just sick of the immaturity when people blame all this shit on him. He gets too much credit.)

I think this a cool idea, knd of like the reverse of the 'Left Behind' series. Also, I'm a Christian and I'm not offended.

I just found this illogical from the first few paragraphs. The president wouldn't have this much power, and anythign extreme like the laws you were speking of would NEVER be passed, unless extreme Republican-conservative-Christians controlled the Cabinet, the House and the Senate, the Sumpreme Court, and basically every influential position within the three branches of the government. Plus, a lot of these things would have to be voted on by the general public, and whle Christianity is the leading religion in the USA, other religions are getting more potent, and will continue to do so as the years go on.

This is well-written, and would be much more logical if government conspiracies were set up to control those in power and change votes. Also, the president alone doesn't hold as much power as he gets credit for. Plus, the way things are going, an extreme Chirstian like in your story would have a LOT of trouble gettig into office and having so much support and power.

I'm sure you know all this, you don't seem like an idiot. Also, I enjoyed your 'puppets in the Supreme Court' line, that shows that you were getting into the conspiracy thing, at leeast a little. I jut think you need to get into a little more background of that.