oh wow this is absolutely amazing i hope to read more of your stuff

I love it. Reminds me of myself, when I started out. One thing I'd like to point out, it would make it more like-able for others if the names weren't there.

Great job, adding to favourites and alerts.

This is really good! I'm glad you found someone better. And yes he just needs to grow up. Adding to favs and C2!

XKristie MarieX