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| Ardie 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abusei like it i have been there before so i know the feeling nicely writtin |
| lookin4nemo 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abusewonderful! I love poems like this! Muy bien! ~nemo~ |
| BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful and so painfilled... i have the sudden urge to give you a hug now |
| kloun doll 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusethe last line is amazing, the whole idea from this is good, when I broke with my boy-friend I wondered the same questions. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI like this... it's very desperate sounding if that makes sense... really nicely done |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI hope it's not another broken heart. Good job expressing yourself. Nice work. Have a great day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| sweets555 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseMaybe he's just busy! I thought one of my friends was ignoring me for ages...turns out he just got a job. Whoops? Well written, good job. Hope you talk to him soon. |
| Yusuf 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseWhat little we'd know if time not repeat itself. I'm sorry that this is happening. And know, that my hope lies with yours. ~Yusuf |