 Ardie 2008-06-17 . chapter 1i like it i have been there before so i know the feeling nicely writtin |
 lookin4nemo 2008-06-09 . chapter 1wonderful! I love poems like this! Muy bien!
~nemo~ |
 BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-03-22 . chapter 1this is beautiful and so painfilled... i have the sudden urge to give you a hug now |
 kloun mannequin 2008-03-14 . chapter 1the last line is amazing, the whole idea from this is good, when I broke with my boy-friend I wondered the same questions. |
 simpleplan13 2008-03-07 . chapter 1I like this... it's very desperate sounding if that makes sense... really nicely done |
 Twilight Starr 2008-03-07 . chapter 1I hope it's not another broken heart. Good job expressing yourself. Nice work. Have a great day.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 sweets555 2008-03-07 . chapter 1Maybe he's just busy! I thought one of my friends was ignoring me for ages...turns out he just got a job. Whoops?
Well written, good job.
Hope you talk to him soon. |
 Yusuf 2008-03-07 . chapter 1What little we'd know if time not repeat itself.
I'm sorry that this is happening. And know, that my hope lies with yours.
~Yusuf |