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| skinnyjeans.wb 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseyou didn't really answer the questions...but it was.. cute :) |
| Written 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseIt's not bad, but it reads almost as a list, and the repetition of the why's doesn't really help make it sound more poetic, to me. but if it sounds good to you, then who am I to judge. keep writing :) |