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Reviews For: I Don't Understand

skinnyjeans.wb
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseyou didn't really answer the questions...but it was.. cute :)
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2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseIt's not bad, but it reads almost as a list, and the repetition of the why's doesn't really help make it sound more poetic, to me.

but if it sounds good to you, then who am I to judge. keep writing :)
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