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| zeecrazyeggbloos 2008-03-21 ch 1,  | abuselove the way this was written!! :) |
| KnittingKneedle 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHi, this review is brought to you by the review marathon (link on my profile) So this is the first western I've ever reviewed. I'm not a huge fan of horses but you do desrcibe them in such a way that makes me think I really should like horses. I like the parralel between the foul-mouthed Clara and the broken horse- I also like that she isn't perfect and doesn't get it right the first time, it's very realistic and great. Like I said, I'm not THAT big of a horse fan so the plot didn't really do that much for me...still you write well and I enjoyed your characters...good job! |