Hm... Yeah. I like it.

haha! this was so cute!
I loved the last couple lines 'and I can't seem to keep it from sinking to th pit of my stomach' and of course the last one

didn't expect it, but so incredibly cute and very well done

i applaud.

ha ha ha...so cute i love the old west thing. very original

** indeed... But the idea is very clever, well done!