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| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abusedammit that last line got to me. oh my goodness. that was good |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseDangit this makes it more depressing. You're evil, I tell you, evil. But in ways I like this better as a standalone; I feel like she expresses more secrets than he does, and I love this. It's still well-written, which is why I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2 too. (: |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful sequel, very well written :) |
| mia5081 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseI've decided that I think they should get together lol. Really, this one was really good too. Ah, I want happiness =) Great job! ~Mia |
| starlit x sky 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAww that is really sad. But it's really cute too. Great job |
| artistic dreamer 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseaw...this is cute too! if only they were real and saw each other's I love and I hate's, then they get to be together! hahah lovely job :) |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is even more heartbreakingly sad, oh gosh. :( But don't get me wrong, it was adorable, for sure. Keep it up!! (: -Brittany |
| whispered enigma 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseOh...so sad. |
| HelloLovely 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseAwh! I want there to be another one where they get together!! Oh I love this, it's so sweet and sad. Love, Becca |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuse*bites lip at cuteness* aww!! That's all I can really say at the moment... hehe -x- |
| GrannyP 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseStill very interesting, with the multiple relationships going on between the "her", "you" and "me" people. It's like a good friend who is dating the guy that she likes. I still like how no one has to have names or that you don't have to come right out and introduce everyone; they just come up as they come up. Nice job again with this one! |