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| lookin4nemo 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI FREAKIN LOVE IT! it is so amazing! th ewhole deadly kiss concept! wonderful wonderful! i think it is one of my favs! |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I mean, "like" in the way of the poem, not the subject matter XD It reminds me of something I wrote once, incredibly similar, but it was a story. Anyway, I love how you mixed the brutality in with metaphors that made it sound positive, e.g. "black and blue passion". Very well done poem. Moon's Poetess |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseamazing, amazing piece. So well written. Great job. Faith |