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Reviews For: deadly kiss's caress

lookin4nemo
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI FREAKIN LOVE IT! it is so amazing! th ewhole deadly kiss concept! wonderful wonderful! i think it is one of my favs!
Moon's Poetess
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI like it. I mean, "like" in the way of the poem, not the subject matter XD It reminds me of something I wrote once, incredibly similar, but it was a story. Anyway, I love how you mixed the brutality in with metaphors that made it sound positive, e.g. "black and blue passion". Very well done poem.

Moon's Poetess
Faith Adeline
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseamazing, amazing piece. So well written. Great job.
Faith
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