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mindless.stupidity.ness
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseIt's really beautiful, it makes me sad when I think about it, but it's really good.
lookin4nemo
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseyou did very well! i love the way how you said the father gives a not to worry grin and but crys and i am sorry...perfect! it is so amazing. but yet sad. keep it up!
Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseWow. Breathtaking. Just... amazing. It gave me goosebumps it was so good! Love it! So tragic, and yet, there's a sense of hope in the end. Great job, once again!
--Katrina Zeffirelli
Faith Adeline
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abusewow, excellent piece. Truly, truly great piece...So well written. Wonderful job.
Faith
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