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| mindless.stupidity.ness 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's really beautiful, it makes me sad when I think about it, but it's really good. |
| lookin4nemo 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseyou did very well! i love the way how you said the father gives a not to worry grin and but crys and i am sorry...perfect! it is so amazing. but yet sad. keep it up! |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. Breathtaking. Just... amazing. It gave me goosebumps it was so good! Love it! So tragic, and yet, there's a sense of hope in the end. Great job, once again! --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusewow, excellent piece. Truly, truly great piece...So well written. Wonderful job. Faith |