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lookin4nemo
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseah i love it so descriptive and wonder ful! keep it up it is amazing! i love the mood it sets!
The Star Catcher
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseMy my my, this is a very descriptive and wonderful poem! I love your imagery and how you describe things. My most favorite is the liquid copper fountains from the pen mold into a penny for your thoughts. Very nice! The writing style is also very unique! Great job!
fairytale failure
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI love the spirituality and beautiful images in this poem! I also think the summary is fantastic - it really caught my interest. I liked the first stanza the best, especially 'with words that splatter stars in the sky each night'.
Faith Adeline
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abusewow, great piece. I really enjoyed it.
Faith
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