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| thecantervilleghost 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really great. It sounds so real. I've experienced this entire scenario before and you put it into words, perfectly. Amazing! |
| fairytale failure 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI love the contrast, how what you are saying is so different from how you feel. The ending was great; it completely turns the whole poem around. |
| WetRedLiquid 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseLike speeding down a highway and -- all of a sudden -- slamming into a brick wall. I loved it. |
| kelsi bones 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is so raw. It's almost tragic how it ends, but I love it. Good gob. k.X |