Haha, I love this! Especially because I know someone who played the Friar.

Your ending was too perfect for words. Your abruptness just increased the humor of it. I was dying of laughter!

I wish you had played up the tradgedy and angst of the original play more. I think it would have added to the quality of the earlier writing, as well as make the ending even more sudden and hilarious.

Very nice job with this :)

wow, I can't believe it... well, it's kinda interesting and you're right, you didn't take much time to write it, but I think the beginning is pretty nice.

Lol, you know I simply adore R&J and I have re written the ending myself a thousand times but my this is something else! Lol, made me laugh.

Odd idea, good, but odd, odd is good xD Beautifully written too, in Shakespearian style...you know...except for 'made out'. Lol, I don't recall the Bard ever saying that but who knows!

And if you do have any flamers then I will shoot them for you xD

Holli x

"She is a great author and if you don't read her stories I will flame you until die..."
... Well, I was either afraid of your friend or intrigued by your work. Take your pick. Just kidding. I liked this. I've been staring at the review box for probably ten minutes and I've still got a goofy grin on my face. Seriously. Friar Laurence? I had to do something similar for English and I wrote about Apothecary being crazy...Lol...random statement...Did you get an A? LOL!!

lol frenchie... call me later.
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~Rent Lover~

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What a surprise ending! Great job!

My instant reaction is this:

LOL.

Don't worry - I won't shoot you. You may have insulted one of Shakespeare's greatest works but he too was a man who wrote quickly, and for profit.

I just have to praise the suddenness of the ending. I was expecting something tragic, something emo.

"And then they made out."

There really is nothing for it other than LOL.

I didn't look at the genre until just now. It really is. Ridiculous as it may be... Well...

Thank you for brightening up my evening, sort of.

O.o Well, that was definitely a shocking ending. You kind of rushed the ending but I guess that is to be expected since it was written in five minutes. Keep that in mind though when writing future stories. Readers can usually tell when an ending has been rushed.

And don't worry. No one is going to shoot you.