Reviews for The Butterfly - FictionPress.com

Twilight Starr 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abuseThis is so sad. Great job expressing the butterfly's feelings. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~
Getuie 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseWow. So many layers to this piece. Quite insightful.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseThis reminds me of a recent visit to an airport-store where they were selling those butterflies preserved in glass. I think that's a good thing, though. =P I like when writing makes me think/recall things and events. I really like the line 'It’s perfect, both in English and Latin'. And is the first line supposed to be sarcastic, I wonder? That the butterfly is bitter at being caught and labeled so? The lines 'you’ll have forgotten about me by tomorrow' and 'I know that you can’t hear me' are touching ones. Poor butterfly. =( I like how you personified and gave it a voice, though. =)
S. M. Saves 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseI don't understand the use for the hypens at the beginning of some of the lines but the poem's content was excellent and kind of creepy, especially at the end "I know that you can't hear me".