yea Scott so delivered!

yea Scott's gonna kill Wayne ...hopefully!

Taylor sliced his stomach open?

somebody say ouch

"ouch"

no hugging in d hall ways wat kind of a dumb rule is dat?

omg Zabri needs little back bone if it were me and my sis there aint no way in hell she can tell me dat without me saying d same thing just a lil harsher

Ok, the concept of the story is a cute one, if not a little cliche, but there's A LOT that needs to be worked on in it. I'm not trying to be nasty, but I feel that this could be a good story if you improved a couple of things. The grammar could use some improving, as well as the general credibility of the events in the story. This chapter, for instance. Sabrina and Brian didn't believe Z had been raped and then *poof*, magically they believes her after Mama Rae says 'imagine you were Z'. And then Z automatically just forgives them, not only for that but for all the other shit they put her through. That's a little ridiculous.

The whole thing with Scott feeling Z up in the beginning of the story was also slightly ridiculous. That IS sexual harassment, and I don't know any girl who would just be like 'oh, I'm mad at him, but really, it's ok.' And I don't know any decent guy who would think it's totally fine to just walk up to a girl and feel her up. Stuff like that is just totally inconsistent with reality.

Ok wow this is the first piece of original work i've read on this site and wow! this is awesome so far!

i can't believe Zabri did it! wow good for her!

Haha Scott soo did not that coming!

but i wonder what's gonna happen next?

T_T it ends there? please tell me the sequel is already up? I mean you practiicaly made us fall in love with scott ourselves. you did a really great job and the fruits of your labor are, lets just go with extremly tasty. hehe metaphore XD

Awesome story! I loved it! You're a really great writer.

kisses

What DOES Olive Juice mean?

Oh wow! So far its really good, uses big words and all. Many from the 103 word vocab. test we had this year, but, anyway! The characters have personality and it seems real, the way that the boys are actually boys, not princes.

wow! great story. i love scott because he's so weird and random. and the epilogues were awesome as they had closure. the story was so sentimental. the characters felt so real i could actually imagine them properly in my mind. it felt as though they were actually my friends.

OMGOSH this chapter made me cry! IT was so sad how they were talking to her like that!I love this story!

omg! i cant believe he just felt her up!

I want my own Prince Charming!

Great story!